She's done beautifully! ^.^ The only problem is of her eyes. Her eyes are a light-hazel color instead of blue. Alluna has dark-blue eyes, Marisu gray-green, and Ebele dark-blue as well (hers were correct though. ^.~ )

The rest of this though... Her ears are a bit large, but that really adds to the cute appeal! ^.^ When I get money from my book, you get a pizza :3 ...or I'll let you be one of the firsts to read the story. >.o Gonna put it out for a test-crowd before I get it published.

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Are you serious?? A whole pizza would be AMAZING.
I went back and tried to make her ears a bit smaller but I'm afraid it might've blurred them a bit. o_O O_o Hopefully it's not extremely noticeable though. I think I fixed the eyes too. Let me know if they're correct now. I keep playing around with the swirlies that I originally had in there. Let me know if you think they're a bit much, because I just couldn't decide. D8

I'd be happy to read your story. ^-^ I can't say honestly whether I'd be the best critic or not though... My cousin is a pretty awesome literary critic, I might read it and then let her have a look at it too.

Ah, the drawing looks even better than before with the little adjustments. :3 The ears are just... so squeezable and cute either way. X3 Just keep in mind that all four sisters are quadruplets. >.o All of the same litter, but of course, not identical. The eyes, the figures... definitely the attitudes. ^_^

Anyway, I've got only the ideas written, and I'm still gaining those. The writing will begin sometime this summer or early fall. I'll put it out to a select audience (which may include you >.o), ask for feedback, and then maybe get you guys to send a letter of awesomeness to publishers. ^_^

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Be normal.
Be odd.

Furcadians
Release your beast.
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Sobi Tribe (site): [link]
Sobi Scribes (dA): [link]

Better late than never -- so much had piled on my end

The work is just beautiful; I can see the pen strokes, and nicely controlled It's also interesting to see a bubble-like atmosphere you surrounded the character in -- Well done!

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